Is this a good song so far?

This is a song about a dad leaving his daughter

Lyrics:
i don't think he's coming back this time
she laid her head done and started to cry
She was used to him walking out that door
but he'd come back every time before
He was acting so different now, but she still wanted him back somehow
She grabbed a piece of paper and a pen
And this is the letter that you wrote to him.
Chorus:
Daddy, what did I do wrong?
You've never been away for so long
I've been looking out the window for quite some time
But I still can't see the reflection of your headlights
I will do anything if you could just come back,
i will fix everything that i lack
i wanna hear the sound of the keys unlocking the door
i wanna hear your footsteps once more..
I love you daddy, sincerely your baby girl

So he's been gone for some time
Hasn't been there to tuck her in at bedtime
But she's almost full grown
But highschool makes her feel so alone
Whenever a kid mentions their dad
she just pictures what she never had
She grabbed a piece of paper and a pen
and this is the letter that she wrote to him
Chorus:
Daddy, what did I do wrong?
You've been away for so long
I've been looking out the window for quite some time
But I still can't see the reflection of your headlights
I will do anything if you could just come back,
i will fix everything that i lack
i wanna hear the sound of the keys unlocking the door
i wanna hear your footsteps once more..
I love you daddy, sincerely your growing girl

So she's stopped counting the years he hasn't been there
She's done with thinking life's unfair
she's met a new man and he gave her ring
she's sending out invitations to the wedding
She sends him an invitation anyways
And starts a countdown till the big day..
Then she grabbed a piece of paper and a pen
and this is the last letter that she wrote to him..
Chorus:
Daddy, I didn't do anything wrong
You've been away for so long
I've been done looking out the window for quite some time
I haven't seen the reflection of your headlights
If you show up at the wedding, then ill see you there
but what you wont see are my tears
I'm done crying and praying that you'll come back
I've found a man who will love me even with everything i lack
I don't know why you left.. but I still love you daddy, sincerely your
girl